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Freelance Poem- Big Daddy and Sleeping Daughter

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She speaks in quiet words,
because anything too loud will be akin to poison
on her ears.
She cannot see,
but words paint pictures
and she wishes she could be blind to them too.
They come in too many colors
too many flavors
some are as gentle and sweet as her voice
others are too loud and burning hot that they bring her to tears.
The memories hurt just like the words;
they need to die.


He has lost his voice,
but things are still okay because
actions are louder than words.
It is she who tilts her head up,
eyebrows knitted in fear and concern,
and says those words.
For him, it is like being set free.
Set free to protect the thing that means most to him.
It is just them in their world,
a quiet, quiet world.
If anything or anyone gets noisy
they shall be stopped
by his hands.


They walk side by side
away from a noise-maker.
They make not a sound more;
just as it should be for
the Sleeping Daughter and her Big Daddy.
So um… Went and did a little adventuring. Found the goldmine that is Big Daddy and Sleeping Daughter by :iconmaryotic:. Went gallery poking for more cool artwork and OCs. Got inspired (by this, mainly, somehow [ maryotic.deviantart.com/art/Ki… ]) and decided to write this!

…Is this even how one does freelance?? Usually I just write in couplets… So much easier for me, I like the style of it. Simple, like me.
Then again, I do like how this turned out. If you read it like how it is, the pauses give great dramatic effect that I'm kind of in love with right now! Maybe, if I ever get around to voicing stuff, I'll read this. Show everybody what I hear when I read this, when I wrote it. c;

In other news, more things that come from my brain at 1 AM.
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mvrtyrii's avatar
I luv poems!
And I really like, how du U wrote the way dey are down.
In such a simply and amazing way, U wrote, what I drew in over 7- 8 pictures!
I luv it! Keep it up! Thank U really, really much 4 doing dis birdy!
Aaand also, that U took time tu du that! ... Whoa! First time, dat a birdy du dat 4 Me <3 :iconflyingheartsplz: